Tell me about your favorite food.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite food is pizza. Pizza have many different types so I can always try new flavors. Among the many things, I like Hawaiian pizza with pineapple the most. The combination of pizza and coke is the best. And it is convenient to eat with friend or family because it is cut the same size. Talking about pizza made me want to eat.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sandy!
Hmmm, one of the best food I like!
I think pizza is addictive - hahaha.
Enjoy some slice today :)
Thank you for sharing!
My favorite food is pizza.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: I love pizza!
Pizza have many different types so I can always try new flavors.
>>> Pizza has many different types so I can always try new flavors.
OR: There are various types of pizza, so you can taste new flavors at any time.
Among the many things, I like Hawaiian pizza with pineapple the most.
>>> CORRECT!
The combination of pizza and coke is the best.
>>> CORRECT!
And it is convenient to eat with friend or family because it is cut the same size.
>>> And it is cut into the same size, making it convenient to eat with friends and family.
Talking about pizza made me want to eat.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: Talking about pizza made me want to eat it.
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