Tell me about your favorite movie and who you usually watch movies with
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually see a movie on weekends with my husband when I have some free time.
and I so sometime see a movie with my friends when I hang out with them.
I like to talk with them about movie story after see a move while have some food at a restaurant
so I am able to have fun with them when I have some free time.
I like to watch action movies and there are several reasone why
First, I like them because they have simple story and easy to understand
and I also they are packed with exciting action scens.
so I can get rid of stress by watching them.
In addition, action movies cheer me up when I fee depreesed.
So I like action movies
강사 첨삭
Good morning Julia!
Thank you for writing this. Please check the corrections and the revised sentences that I made. Practice them regularly.
Have a great day! See you tomorrow :)
Aki~
I usually see a movie on weekends with my husband when I have some free time.
>>> CORRECT!
and I so sometime see a movie with my friends when I hang out with them.
>>> And I sometimes see a movie with my friends when I hang out with them.
I like to talk with them about movie story after see a move while have some food at a restaurant
>>> I like to talk with them about the story of the movie that we saw while eating at a restaurant
so I am able to have fun with them when I have some free time.
>>> CORRECT!
I like to watch action movies and there are several reasone why
>>> I like watching action movies and there are several reasons why.
First, I like them because they have simple story and easy to understand
>>> First, they have a simple story and are easy to understand.
and I also they are packed with exciting action scens.
>>> Also, they are paced with exciting action scenes.
so I can get rid of stress by watching them.
>>> CORRECT!
In addition, action movies cheer me up when I fee depreesed.
>>> In addition, action movies cheer me up when I feel depressed.
So I like action movies
>>> That makes me like action movies.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.