Tell me about your favorite restaurant.
학생이 쓴 원문
my favorite restaurant is Rannis Pizza. you know my favorite cuisine is pizza and Rannis Pizza never disappointing me.
That restaurant is positioned in near by my city, so i can go there whenever i want!
and actually i worked in that restaurant for 1 years as a clerk. when i worked in there, i can eat pizza every workdays. i was so happy those times.
but unfortunately after i changed my job. i could not eat it often. its because Rannis Pizza is quiet delicious but it is so expansive.
so when i get a new job and earn some money i will eat it every week!
강사 첨삭
Hello Robin!
Sad to hear that you lost the pizza you used to eat. It might be a very mouthwatering food. Try to save what you earn to buy this pizza again. Have a great day! ^^
~T. Maine
>>My favorite restaurant is Rannis Pizza.
you know my favorite cuisine is pizza and Rannis Pizza never disappointing me.
>> You know my favorite cuisine is pizza and Rannis Pizza never disappoints me.
That restaurant is positioned in near by my city, so i can go there whenever i want!
That restaurant is positioned in near by my city, so i can go there whenever i want!
>> That restaurant is positioned nearby my city, so I can go there whenever I want.
and actually i worked in that restaurant for 1 years as a clerk.
and actually i worked in that restaurant for 1 years as a clerk.
>> And actually, I worked in that restaurant for 1 year as a clerk.
when i worked in there, i can eat pizza every workdays. i was so happy those times.
>>When I worked there, I can eat pizza every workday so I was so happy at those times.
but unfortunately after i changed my job. i could not eat it often.
but unfortunately after i changed my job. i could not eat it often.
>> Unfortunately after I changed my job, I could not eat it often anymore.
its because Rannis Pizza is quiet delicious but it is so expansive.
>>It\'s because Rannis Pizza is quite delicious but it is so expensive.
so when i get a new job and earn some money i will eat it every week!
so when i get a new job and earn some money i will eat it every week!
>> So when I get a new job and earn more money, I will eat it every week.
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