Tell me about your favorite sports game.

2021-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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My favorite sports has [이름]ged from age. Because it is important who play with me. When i was a high school student. I enjoyed basketball with my friends. I played tennis in university tennis club. and I enjoy snorkeling with my girlfriend.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Mr. [Name]! Thank you for answering the homework today. I am glad that you make some efforts to excel in your English study. See you in our class! :)
- Teacher Sophia


My favorite sports has [이름]ged from age. Because it is important who play with me.

>> I always [이름]ge my favorite sports because what matters is the person who play with me.
When i was a high school student. I enjoyed basketball with my friends.

>> When I was a high school student, I enjoy playing basketball with my friends.
I played tennis in university tennis club. and I enjoy snorkeling with my girlfriend.

>> I play tennis in university tennis club and I enjoy snorkeling with my girlfriend.

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