Tell me about your first impression of your boss.
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you know. i work in math academy. so my boss is headteacher of math academy. when i first met my boss. i was little nervous, because first of all, she has a very scared face like a witch, and seemed to be a very strict person. but after i work hard and approve my students math skill . she turned like an angel. so now i feel comfortable when i talk with her.
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Hello Robin!
You can describe your boss well. Take note of the correct pattern on how to answer this question well. Memorize the pattern or follow the patterns. You can do it! ^^
~T. Maine
you know. i work in math academy. so my boss is headteacher of math academy.
>>As you know, I work in a math academy so my boss is the headteacher of the math academy.
when i first met my boss. i was little nervous, because first of all, she has a very scared face like a witch, and seemed to be a very strict person.
>>When I first met my boss, I was a little nervous because first of all she had a very scary face like a witch and seemed to be a very strict person.
but after i work hard and approve my students math skill . she turned like an angel.
>>But after I worked hard and approved my students\' math skills, she turned like an angel to me.
so now i feel comfortable when i talk with her.
>>So now I feel comfortable when I talk with her.
^^
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