tell me about your hometown.
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My hometown is Jeonju where is famous for its Bibimbob and a lot of excellent foods.
>> My hometown is Jeonju where is it\'s famous for its Bibimbob and a lot of excellent foods.
My hometown is not so urban place such as Seoul or Busan where has many high buildings, but not that rural.
>> My hometown is not so urban place such as Seoul or Busan where there are a lot of high buildings, but not that rural.
Every time I visit my hometown I find that local food is fantastic and very reasonable.
>> I find that local food is fantastic and very reasonable. Every time I visit my hometown.
Finally, there are some famous places for sightseeing.
>> And finally, there are some famous places for sightseeing.
Reasonable prices and fantastic food represent my hometown.
>> Reasonable prices and fantastic food represents my hometown.
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