Tell me about your job. What do you do?

2018-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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Hi~Teacher It is too difficult to explain my job. @ @ ;;;; There are various type of residental spaces in South koea. Nowadays, one-person household like students,employees is increaseing . I rent rooms and get a monthly rent. It`s a bit different from the guesthouse. My building is called `livingtel` or `one-roomtel` in korea. ` Many people who live and study reside more than a month in my `livingtel` I have two employees and cleaners in my office. What do i call my jop???

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It is too difficult to explain my job. @ @ ;;;;

>> CORRECT


There are various type of residental spaces in South koea.

>> There are types of residential spaces in South Korea.

Nowadays, one-person household like students,employees is increaseing .

>> But, nowadays, one-person places like students and employees is increasing.


I rent rooms and get a monthly rent.

>> I rent rooms and get monthly rents.


It`s a bit different from the guesthouse.

>> It\'s a bit different from guesthouses.


My building is called `livingtel` or `one-roomtel` in korea.

>> My building is called \"living-tel\" or \"one-roomtel\" in Korea.
 `
Many people who live and study reside more than a month in my `livingtel`

>> There are a lot of people who lives and studies for more than a month in my \"livingtel\"

 I have two employees and cleaners in my office.

>> I have two employees and housekeepers in my office.

What do i call my jop???


You\'re called a \"Landlord\" kkk ^^



By the way, try to lessen the use of the word \"many\" instead, you can use words like \"several\" or \"a lot\" ^^

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