Tell me about your most recent job.

2023-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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Since I\'m a fresh graduate, I\'ve only had two years of experience in the past. In my most recent job, I worked as an assistant in the computer engineering department in my university. My tasks included answering calls, setting up time tables between the professor and student, as being in charge of the overall administrative work of the department. Managing of the professor\'s documents were a big part of my job. Working as a computer engineering assistant for my university was quite challenging, but it provided me with valuable experience and delightful memories. If you give me a chance to work in your company then this will be other wonderful and delightful job.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]. Thanks for this. Well done! See you in class tomorrow. ^^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Tell me about your most recent job.
Since I\'m a fresh graduate, I\'ve only had two years of experience in the past.
>> Correct
In my most recent job, I worked as an assistant in the computer engineering department in my university.
>> Correct
My tasks included answering calls, setting up time tables between the professor and student, as being in charge of the overall administrative work of the department.
>> My tasks included answering calls, setting up timetables between the professor and students, and being in charge of the overall administrative work of the department.
Managing of the professor\'s documents were a big part of my job.
>> Managing the professor\'s documents was a significant part of my job.
Working as a computer engineering assistant for my university was quite challenging, but it provided me with valuable experience and delightful memories.
>> Working as a computer engineering assistant at my university was quite challenging, but it provided me with valuable experience and delightful memories.
If you give me a chance to work in your company then this will be other wonderful and delightful job.
>> If you give me a chance to work for your company, it will be another wonderful and delightful job.

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