Tell me about your \'ultimate dream/goal\' in life. Kindly answer in 3 to 5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream is to be an artist and curator.
But I would like to do not just ordinary work but special work.
Making own exhibition is my ultimate goal.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Sue!
^^,)
I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
Thank you for answering your homework.
I will talk with you again on Monday. Good night.
_T. Mayleen :)
My dream is to be an artist and curator.
>>> Correct!
But I would like to do not just ordinary work but special work.
>>> However, I would like to do extraordinary/special work instead of ordinary ones.
Making own exhibition is my ultimate goal.
>>> Having my own exhibition is my ultimate goal.
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