tell me about your weekend

2019-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

학생이 쓴 원문

I enjoy the weekend by myself. I usually go out for a workout such as a gym or swimming and then after finishing the work out, sometimes I go to a famous Ramen restaurant. I like Japanese Ramen a lot, and I feel happy every time I found a good ramen restaurant. The way I enjoy the weekend life is simple, but I like this way because this way makes me refreshed and helps me get rid of the stress I got from work.

강사 첨삭

I enjoy the weekend by myself.

>> I enjoyed the weekend by myself.

I usually go out for a workout such as a gym or swimming and then after finishing the work out, sometimes I go to a famous Ramen restaurant.

>> I usually go out for a workout such as going to the gym or go swimming and then after finishing the work out, sometimes I go to a famous Ramen restaurant.

I like Japanese Ramen a lot, and I feel happy every time I found a good ramen restaurant.

>> CORRECT

The way I enjoy the weekend life is simple, but I like this way because this way makes me refreshed and helps me get rid of the stress I got from work.

>> CORRECT

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