Tell me about your weekend.
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In this weekend, i went to Gangju where is located in near by my hometown to check-up my disease on the back. Unfortunately, The disease on my back, disk, seems to be getting worse. So, i went to the hospital for the make an appointment with my doctor for the surgery and final check-up. Thus, i was conducted some checkup like a MRI, hospitalized during 3 days. There was no treatment other than a test during the hospitalization. To the end, I decided to schedule my operation with my doctor and came back to Busan today.
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I feel bad about your back my dear. :\'( I hope it gets better soon.
>> This weekend, I went to Gangju which is located near my hometown, to get my back checked.
Unfortunately, The disease on my back, disk, seems to be getting worse.
>> Unfortunately, my back seems to be getting worse.
So, i went to the hospital for the make an appointment with my doctor for the surgery and final check-up.
>> So, I went to the hospital to make an appointment with my doctor for the surgery, and finally, get my back checked.
Thus, i was conducted some checkup like a MRI, hospitalized during 3 days.
>> Thus, I got checked with an MRI, and I got hospitalized for 3 days.
There was no treatment other than a test during the hospitalization.
>> There was no treatment available other than a test that is done when we get hospitalized.
To the end, I decided to schedule my operation with my doctor and came back to Busan today.
>> In the end, I decided to schedule my operation with my doctor and came back to Busan today.
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