Tell me how you get from your house to school everyday. Also, tell me how long it takes you to get t

2014-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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I usually go to work by car. Sometimes I walk to work. On a normal weekday, It takes about 10 minutes to get to work by car. And It takes about 40 minutes to get to work on foot. Actually I try to walk to work, but it is difficult to do in summer.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework. :))
It\'s the start of the week and let\'s be energized to learn and have fun throughout the week :))

CORRECTIONS:


I usually go to work by car.
>> CORRECT
OR>> I use my car to  go for work.

Sometimes I walk to work.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Sometimes, I go there on foot.

On a normal weekday, It takes about 10 minutes to get to work by car.
>> CORRECT
>> It usually takes 10 minutes to get to work by car.

And It takes about 40 minutes to get to work on foot.
>> CORRECT
>>And about 40 minutes on foot.

Actually I try to walk to work, but it is difficult to do in summer.
>> Actually I try to walk to work, but it is difficult during summer.

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