Tell me how you get from your house to work
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two ways for me to go to work. On sunny days, Cloudy days or breezy days, as long as it doesn't rain or snow, I prefer going to walk to work. It's 15 minutes distance from my dom to my office. but I'm supposed to pass two security area to get in my office. and that takes me more time to go to work. Sometimes It's annoying to get inspection everyday, but I totally understand security comes first in these high tech age.
On rainy days, I'm forced to ride a bus to work. I really do not like suing the bus to go to work. you can understand how boring it is to wait for the bus without doing nothing.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!
I understand how you feel.. Every weekend I go home to my hometown and it takes an hour for me to wait before the bus would finally move and go on our way.
It’ so boring and I feel sleepy most of the time.. To entertain myself, I just listen to music or read a good book.
You’re office is quite near to your dorm, I suppose you enjoy the view every time you go to work while walking..
I hope my office could be nearer to my house too…
See you in class!!
T. Shy
On sunny days, Cloudy days or breezy days, as long as it doesn't rain or snow, I prefer going to walk to work.
>> On sunny days, loudy days or breezy days, as long as it doesn't rain or snow, I prefer to walk going to work.
>> On sunny days, cloudy days or breezy days, as long as it doesn't rain or snow, I prefer going to work by foot.
It's 15 minutes distance from my dom to my office.
>> It's 15 minutes away from my dorm to my office.
but I'm supposed to pass two security area to get in my office. and that takes me more time to go to work.
>> But I'm supposed to pass through two security areas to get in my office, and that takes me more time to go to work.
Sometimes It's annoying to get inspection everyday, but I totally understand security comes first in these high tech age.>> Sometimes it’s annoying to get inspected everyday, but I totally understand security comes first in this high tech age.
I really do not like suing the bus to go to work.
>> I really do not like riding the bus to go to work.
you can understand how boring it is to wait for the bus without doing nothing.
>> You can understand how boring it is to wait for the bus doing nothing.
>> You can understand how boring it is to wait for the bus without anything to do.
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