Tell me introduce my self ( 2 )

Before joined the mast korea, I had worked as technical adviser in keehwahitech over 3 years which is gerber cad agency in Korea, I visited vendor , agency & local factory in Vietnam & indonesia and taught the pattern making using cad system to pattern maker & worker. At that time, I learned “know- how” how to revise the pattern in factory side. it is very useful to work as fit technition now. Also I had worked koogie adventure garment company as fabric designer for 2 years I was in charge of develop fabric and order it according to styles My major is fashion & textile design & I got master degree in pattern making. Thank you Thank you Teacher !!

Hello Jiny! I appreciate your effort in writing compositions! I like the words though I need you to learn more so there will be better choices. Furthermore, I noticed that you forget to put punctuation marks at the end of your sentences. Please be cautious of that and try to study about sentence patterns further. Don뭪 forget the rules in capitalization of words. Moreover, give more interest and be patient in everything you do. Have a great time and take care! See you later! ?) ABBY  Tell me introduce my self >> You told me to introduce myself >> Self-Introduction (Possible Title for your composition) Before joined the mast korea, I had worked as technical adviser in keehwahitech over 3 years which is gerber cad agency in Korea, I visited vendor , agency & local factory in Vietnam & indonesia and taught the pattern making using cad system to pattern maker & worker. >> Before I joined the mast Korea, I worked as a technical adviser in Keehwahitech for over 3 years which is a Gerber Cad Agency in Korea. I used to visit vendors, agencies and local factories in Vietnam and Indonesia as well as taught the pattern making using a cad system to the different workers. At that time, I learned “know- how” how to revise the pattern in factory side. >> At that time, I learned how to revise patterns in a factory side. it is very useful to work as fit technition now. >> It is very useful to work as a fit technician. >> Working as a fit technician is very fulfilling.Also I had worked koogie adventure Garment Company as fabric designer for 2 years >> I also worked as a fabric designer for 2 years in Koogie Adventure Garment Company.I was in charge of develop fabric and order it according to styles >> I was in-charge of the development of fabrics and dealing orders according to styles.My major is fashion & textile design & I got master degree in pattern making. >> I majored in Fashion and Textile Designing and got my masters degree in pattern making. Thank you >> CORRECT (Don't forget your punctuation mark)Thank you Teacher !! >> CORRECT