**Tell me more about Japan on why is it that you hate it so much?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Japan is a enemy.When time under the rule of Japanese imperialism, Japanese people bother a Korean people a lot.They stole their reigon fraud. The Japan wants to conqueur a lot of country.In Joseon Dynasty, Japanese ruffian kill the Joseon Dynasty's queen Myeongseong.And they bury the Chinesepeople.Also, they force to don't talk a Korean and since 1945 they are forced to obey the Japanese king.I think Japan is bad so I watch a Japanese cartoon a little.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! ^^
So you shared the reason why you don\'t like Japan that much.
You are right. Japanse people before were bad because they wanted to conquer
a lot of countries. Philippines too was invaded by the Japanese people but
the Philippine people fought back. But I think nowadays, Japanese people are nice and friendly.
That was history and you were so much affected of what happened but of course we have to move on.
Our generation is different from before.
I\'ll see you in class [이름]. Take care always. ^^ :)
~~Teacher Kris
I think Japan is a enemy.
>> I think Japan is an enemy.
When time under the rule of Japanese imperialism, Japanese people bother a Korean people a lot.
>> A long time ago, Korea was under the rule of the Japanese imperialism. The Japanese bothered the Korean people a lot.
They stole their reigon fraud.
>> They stole their region.
The Japan wants to conqueur a lot of country.
>> Japan wanted to conquer a lot of countries.
In Joseon Dynasty, Japanese ruffian kill the Joseon Dynasty\'s queen Myeongseong.
>> In Joseon Dynasty, a Japanese ruffian killed the Joseon Dynasty\'s queen, Myeongseong.
And they bury the Chinesepeople.
>> And they burried a lot of Chinese people.
Also, they force to don\'t talk a Korean and since 1945 they are forced to obey the Japanese king.
>> Also, they forced them not to talk to Korean people. Since 1945, they were forced to obey the Japanese king.
I think Japan is bad so I watch a Japanese cartoon a little.
>> I think Japan is a bad country that is why I only watch Japanese cartoons a little.
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