Tell me some good and bad travel experiences.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in Taiwan, I lost the way. And unfortunately, my phone was discharged. But the local people treat me kindly, so I finally arrived at dormitory with ease. That is my good and bad travel experiences.
강사 첨삭
God day [이름] Ha! Did you consider that an adventure? I guess getting lost in a new place is everybody\'s experiences, but we can find good story about it. More adventures to you in the future!
~Teacher Aki :)
When I was in Taiwan, I lost the way.
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OR >>> I lost my way when I was in Taiwan.
And unfortunately, my phone was discharged.
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OR >>> And unfortunately, my hone run out of battery.
But the local people treat me kindly, so I finally arrived at dormitory with ease.
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OR >>> But the locals were very kind, they help me find my way back to the dormitory smoothly.
That is my good and bad travel experiences.
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OR >>> That is one of my good and bad travel experiences.
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