Tell me something about your dream job
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Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
It looks like you wanted to be in the cargo business when you were young. That\'s a very helpful field. They transport products/goods from one place to another.
See you tomorrow.^^ Have a good night!
_T. Mayleen :)
Until I was in high school, I would be a sailor who trip around the world.
>>> Before high school, I dreamed of becoming a sailor and travel around the world.
I want to help many people who live other places respectively exchange their goods and services one another.
>>> I want to help many people by trading their goods or products in other places.
I would carry better goods and services in any places than in other places to other places.
>>> I would transport quality goods from one place to another.
Consequently most people in the world can enjoy a variety of goods and services which they couldn\'t produce in their places.
>>> Correct!
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