Tell me something about your dream vacation. Answer in 3 to 5 sentences.
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Good evening, Sue! ^-^
Thank you for this composition.
About my feedback, you deserve kind words because of your efforts.
I will talk with you later in class. See you then!
_Teacher Mayleen :)
Thank you for your kind and sophisticated feedback. :)
>>> Correct!
My dream vacation is going to exotic beach of somewhere.
>>> My dream vacation is going to an exotic beach somewhere.
It should be hot enough and sun must be shine.
>>> It should be a hot place where the sun shine\'s brightly.
I will lay down on the sand and drink a cup of lemonade with my handsome boyfriend. LOL
>>> I will lay down on the sand while drinking a cup of lemonade with my handsome boyfriend. LOL
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