Tell me something about your family.
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First, I like it when my mom buy me a big lego that is fun to play. Also she cooks food very well. I think my mom is a good cook. When I and my sister want a delicious food, my my mom cooks it. I love her. Second, my dad is a worker. Also he knows history very well. When it\'s weekend, he loves to read history books to me and my sister. I love playing time with him such as ball, toy plane or dart. I love him, too. Last, my sister is 13 years old. She does gym very well and she can swim very well ,too. She does jumprope so well that I even learn from her. My sister is very nice to everyone. She is nicer than other older sisters.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ellie!
Thank you for giving a very detailed reply.
I hope you will remember these answers so that you can also practice during your free time.
See you tomorrow!
>>First, I like it when my mom buys me big Legos since it is fun to play with.
Also she cooks food very well.
>>She also cooks food very well.
I think my mom is a good cook.
>>CORRECT
OR >> I think my mom is a good chef.
When I and my sister want a delicious food, my my mom cooks it.
>>Whenever my sister and I want delicious food, my mom cooks it.
I love her.
>>CORRECT
Second, my dad is a worker.
>>CORRECT
Also he knows history very well.
>>He also know History very well.
When it\'s weekend, he loves to read history books to me and my sister.
>>When it\'s the weekend, he loves to read History books to me and my sister.
I love playing time with him such as ball, toy plane or dart.
>>I love playing with balls, toy planes and darts with him.
I love him, too.
>>CORRECT
Last, my sister is 13 years old.
>>CORRECT
She does gym very well and she can swim very well ,too.
>>CORRECT
She does jumprope so well that I even learn from her.
>>She also does jump rope very well that even I learned from her.
My sister is very nice to everyone.
>>CORRECT
She is nicer than other older sisters.
>>CORRECT
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