Tell me something about your memorable experience at our school.
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The best memorable experience is Integrated Environmental Management Competition in last year.
>>My most memorable experience is the Integrated Environmental Management Competition which was held last year.
I made a team with older batchmates and other school students, so I had a team leader.
>>I made a team with my older batchmates and students from other schools. So I was chosen as a team leader.
At first, my sociability made we have close relationship.
>>My outgoing personality built a close relationship with my team members.
the project was very difficult, but we constantly found out the solutions.
>>The project given to us was very difficult, but we constantly figured it out.
We have enough to converse, so we had never been fight.
>>We had enough time to converse and share our ideas about it. So we never had any arguments.
Because we did our best, we could get a first prize, Minister of Environment Award.
>>Due to our effort, we won the first prize which was the Minister of Environment Award.
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