Tell me something about your memorable experience at our school.

2021-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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The best memorable experience is Integrated Environmental Management Competition in last year. I made a team with older batchmates and other school students, so I had a team leader. At first, my sociability made we have close relationship. the project was very difficult, but we constantly found out the solutions. We have enough to converse, so we had never been fight. Because we did our best, we could get a first prize, Minister of Environment Award.

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The best memorable experience is Integrated Environmental Management Competition in last year.

>>My most memorable experience is the Integrated Environmental Management Competition which was held last year.
 I made a team with older batchmates and other school students, so I had a team leader.

>>I made a team with my older batchmates and students from other schools.  So I was chosen as a team leader.
 At first, my sociability made we have close relationship.

>>My outgoing personality built a close relationship with my team members.
 the project was very difficult, but we constantly found out the solutions.

>>The project given to us was very difficult, but we constantly figured it out.
 We have enough to converse, so we had never been fight.

>>We had enough time to converse and share our ideas about it.  So we never had any arguments.
 Because we did our best, we could get a first prize, Minister of Environment Award.

>>Due to our effort, we won the first prize which was the Minister of Environment Award.

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