Tell me something that not a lot of people know about you.

2022-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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First, I am good at card magic. When I was young, I was interested in the magic, so I know a lot about the magic. Especially the card magics, so I am good at card magic until now. But I\'ve never performed these kinds of magic nowadays, so they don\'t know about it. Second, I am good at study. Actually, it is easy to get a high score for me. But I\'ve played with my friends a lot, so my friends don\'t believe me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!  

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

First, I am good at card magic.
>> CORRECT

When I was young, I was interested in the magic, so I know a lot about the magic.
>>When I was young, I was interested in the magic, so I know a lot about magic.

Especially the card magics, so I am good at card magic until now.
>> I am good in card magics specifically. 

But I\'ve never performed these kinds of magic nowadays, so they don\'t know about it.
>> CORRECT

Second, I am good at study.
>> Second, I am good at studying. 

Actually, it is easy to get a high score for me.
>>CORRECT

But I\'ve played with my friends a lot, so my friends don\'t believe me.
>> But I\'ve done it before with my friends a lot, so my friends don\'t believe me anymore

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