Tell me the best place to go in your birthplace. ^_^
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My birthplace is Seoul in Korea and the best place to go in my birthplace is the Gwanghwamun. I think it is a harmonious place in Seoul becase there are many korean traditional buildings and modern buildings. People can feel both of past and present in Korea. In addition, these days there are lots of korean traditional clothes that called HanBok rental shops and people can wear various and beautiful Hanboks. Also, there are many good restaurants, cafes, art gallerys and museums. People can have a great time there so the place is always crowded with many people. That\'s why I think the Gwanghwamun is the best place in my birthplace.
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Hey there, Sue!
Glad you were able to find time to do your homework! ^_^
Thanks so much.
Anyway, I hope you\'re okay.
I\'ll talk to you maybe next time, yeah?
Have a good one! ^_^
My birthplace is Seoul in Korea and the best place to go in my birthplace is the Gwanghwamun.
>>My birthplace is Seoul in Korea and the best place to go in my birthplace is Gwanghwamun.
I think it is a harmonious place in Seoul becase there are many korean traditional buildings and modern buildings.
>>I think it is a harmonious place in Seoul because there are many Korean traditional buildings and modern buildings.
People can feel both of past and present in Korea.
>> People can experience Korea both from the past and the present.
In addition, these days there are lots of korean traditional clothes that called HanBok rental shops and people can wear various and beautiful Hanboks.
>>In addition, these days there are lots of Korean traditional clothes called HanBok and rental shops where people can wear various styles and beautiful Hanboks.
Also, there are many good restaurants, cafes, art gallerys and museums.
>> CORRECT!
People can have a great time there so the place is always crowded with many people.
>> CORRECT!
That\'s why I think the Gwanghwamun is the best place in my birthplace.
>>That\'s why I think the Gwanghwamun is the best birthplace.
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