Tell me your feeling when you experienced being betrayed by a friend.

2015-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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If my best friend Eric betrayed me I will be angry. But we will be a good friends as usual. Because when Eric make fun of me I make fun of Eric too.Sp, both mood is bad.But when we meet after fighting, we are a good friend as usual.So, if Eric betrayed me I will annoy at him.But we are a good friend because we are the best friend and my mom and Eric's mom are friend too.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!^.^ Good day!! I\'m glad you accomplished your homework and of course I really appreciate that you put in effort to express your thoughts in words. I can see that you really value your friendship with your chingu Eric-ssi (wink^^wink) That\'s really nice of you:) Anyways, here below you can see the corrections that I\'ve made to your composition so please take note of the errors and keep on practicing your sentence construction because day by day ~haru haru~, you keep on improving. Your sentences were almost well made. So again, Kamsahamnida [이름] and keep up the good work.^.^ ~Teacher Kris If my best friend Eric betrayed me I will be angry. >> Correct OR >> I will be angry if Eric, ifmy bestfriend betrays me. But we will be a good friends as usual. >> But we will remain good friends as usual. Because when Eric make fun of me I make fun of Eric too. >> Because when Eric makes fun of me, I make fun of him too. Sp, both mood is bad. >>Especially if we are both in bad mood. But when we meet after fighting, we are a good friend as usual. >> Even after a fight we\'re still good friends. So, if Eric betrayed me I will annoy at him. >> So if Eric betrays me, I will be annoyed. But we are a good friend because we are the best friend and my mom and Eric\'s mom are friend too. >>But we are best friends and so are our moms, they\'re good friends too.

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