Tell me your opinion about secular people (Example: Secular priests)
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Hello, I\'m going to summarize my thoughts on secular people.
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First of all, I\'m against secular people. So I\'m going to tell you why I\'m against secular people.
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I think the first reason for opposing the secular people is that people should live their own lives.
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Well, I think those in favor of secular life need to follow their own individuality, even though it doesn\'t matter if they live by their own arguments or their individuality.
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The second reason is that secular people think that they\'re revealing money, honor, or power.
>>The second reason is that secular people think that they have money, honor, or power.
For example, suppose you have a secular minister. A secular pastor is a minister who seeks money, honor, or power.
>>For example, suppose you are a secular minister. A secular pastor is a minister who seeks money, honor, or power.
A pastor is a neutral man who preaches at a church and gives various help to people\'s spiritual lives.
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But when these men become secular, when those who lead good and kindness reveal more money or honor, many are confused and the order of the world is destroyed.
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So for these two reasons, I disagree with the secular people.
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