Tell me your opinion about secular people (Example: Secular priests)

2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Hello, I\'m going to summarize my thoughts on secular people. First of all, I\'m against secular people. So I\'m going to tell you why I\'m against secular people. I think the first reason for opposing the secular people is that people should live their own lives. Well, I think those in favor of secular life need to follow their own individuality, even though it doesn\'t matter if they live by their own arguments or their individuality. The second reason is that secular people think that they\'re revealing money, honor, or power. For example, suppose you have a secular minister. A secular pastor is a minister who seeks money, honor, or power. A pastor is a neutral man who preaches at a church and gives various help to people\'s spiritual lives. But when these men become secular, when those who lead good and kindness reveal more money or honor, many are confused and the order of the world is destroyed. So for these two reasons, I disagree with the secular people.

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Hello, I\'m going to summarize my thoughts on secular people.

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First of all, I\'m against secular people. So I\'m going to tell you why I\'m against secular people.

>>CORRECT


I think the first reason for opposing the secular people is that people should live their own lives.

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Well, I think those in favor of secular life need to follow their own individuality, even though it doesn\'t matter if they live by their own arguments or their individuality.

>>CORRECT


The second reason is that secular people think that they\'re revealing money, honor, or power.

>>The second reason is that secular people think that they have money, honor, or power.


For example, suppose you have a secular minister. A secular pastor is a minister who seeks money, honor, or power.

>>For example, suppose you are  a secular minister. A secular pastor is a minister who seeks money, honor, or power.


 A pastor is a neutral man who preaches at a church and gives various help to people\'s spiritual lives.

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But when these men become secular, when those who lead good and kindness reveal more money or honor, many are confused and the order of the world is destroyed.

>>CORRECT


 So for these two reasons, I disagree with the secular people.

>>CORRECT

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