Tell something about your \"dream lifestyle\". What type of life would you like to have if given the
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Well, my dream lifestyle that I guess is to guarantee my leisure time so that no one can interfere at that time. For example, while I\'m taking a rest, co-workers can\'t do that to me. It\'s only my own time.
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Great job Elic! I was hoping for you to share a little bit more and create a bit more sentences, but I am still happy seeing your composition today. Never get tired of expres[이름]g yourself because I know that you can do it. :)
>> Well, my dream lifestyle is a lifestyle that guarantees leisure time all to myself, leisure time that no one can interfere.
For example, while I\'m taking a rest, co-workers can\'t do that to me.
>> For instance, while I\'m taking a rest, my co-workers can\'t bother me.
It\'s only my own time.
>> My leisure time is only for me.
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