Tell something interesting about my city
학생이 쓴 원문
My city name is Namyangju. My city is very quiet and clean. And our city has specialties. It is pear. Pear is our city\'s specialties. Also, there was a very famous person in my city. He is Jung Yak-yong. He was a very famous academician in Jo[이름]n. He was excellent in many fields, including science, politics, and learing.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Sophia
My city name is Namyangju.
>> The name of my city is Namyangju.
My city is very quiet and clean.
>> Correct
And our city has specialties.
>> Correct
It is pear.
>> My city is famous for pears.
Pear is our city\'s specialties.
>> Pear is our city\'s specialty.
Also, there was a very famous person in my city.
>> Correct
He is Jung Yak-yong. He was a very famous academician in Jo[이름]n.
>> Correct
He was excellent in many fields, including science, politics, and learing.
>> He was excellent in many fields, including science, politics, and learning.
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