Tell three things that motivates you when you feel down

Drinking with friends can give me A vibe and mekes me feel excited. While talking with friends,I can forget things that makes me feel down. But the problem is when I left alone after the meeting,I might still feel lonely and blue. Secondly, excercising like playing tennis or hiking is the most powerful cure for all my problems. Sweating can help my body heat up to burn calories and keep my energy levels high. Thirdly, going to an agriculture and fish auction market makes me realize that there are many people who are making all the efforts to live their lives fullest. Such farmers' and fisheries' markets usually often at 2 or 3 o'clock early in the morning and the market is packed with sellers and buyers who are yelling to sell their products. But, above all, the ultimate way to overcome the blues is to identify the causes of your depression and get rid of them. If you failed an exam, lost money, blew off a fortune, got laid off, got sick, etc., we have to think it positively.

Hi! I am very glad that you did your composition. I could see that you answered the question well. You gave the three things that motivate you when you feel down. You also stated some examples. However,  I can see some things which you need to improve. When you enumerate things you state which one is the first idea followed by the next ones. Keep working on your grammar too.^^ Enjoy your day! Drinking with friends can give me A vibe and mekes me feel excited. While talking with friends,I can forget things that makes me feel down. >> First, drinking with friends can give me good vibes and makes me feel excited. While talking with friends, I can forget the things that make me feel down. But the problem is when I left alone after the meeting,I might still feel lonely and blue. >> But the problem is when I am left alone after the meeting, I still feel lonely/blue. Secondly, excercising like playing tennis or hiking is the most powerful cure for all my problems. >> Second, exercising like playing tennis or hiking is one of the most powerful treatments to my problems. Sweating can help my body heat up to burn calories and keep my energy levels high. >> Sweating can help my body burn calories and keep my energy level high. Thirdly, going to an agriculture and fish auction market makes me  realize that there are many people who are making all the efforts to live their lives fullest. >> Third, going to the market makes me realize that there are many people doing their best to live a good life. >> OR: Third, going to the market makes me realize that there are many people exerting their effort to make a living. Such farmers\' and fisheries\' markets usually often at 2 or 3 o\'clock early in the morning and the market is packed with sellers and buyers who are yelling to sell their products. >> Such farmers and fishermen usually open at 2:00 or 3:00 in the morning and the market is packed with sellers and buyers who yell at each other before they buy or sell their products. But, above all, the ultimate way to overcome the blues is to identify the causes of your depression and get rid of them. >> But, above all, the ultimate way to overcome the sadness is to identify the causes of your depression and get rid of them. If you failed an exam, lost money, blew off a fortune, got laid off, got sick, etc., we have to think it positively. >> If you fail in an exam, lost money, blew off a fortune, got laid off, got sick etc./and the like, you have to think positively.