Tell us about a memorable, enjoyable, or strange dream you\'ve had.
학생이 쓴 원문
There was a time I always dreamed about flying. In one of that dreams, I was going to school to submit some paper. There was a park full of trees and beside it, there was a wide land covered with grass and huge river.
When I was in the park, suddenly I could jump higher than normal and whenever I walk, it was like walking on a trmpoline. The more I jump, the higher it gets and after all, I could jump very high(5-10meters)and softly so it almost looked like flying. People in the park said I jump very high. Wind from the river brought me higher. It was hard to control the direction but it was fascinating. My classmates said I fly because I want attention, but I couldn\'t stop. In another flying dream, I jumped too high, so I couldn\'t stop after I got to high sky where even clouds don\'t exist but I landed safely.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]~
Have you ever searched for the meaning of your dream? I read that flying in dreams means freedom and independence. It may happen to you or these are the things you want to happen in life. See you in class.
T. Aki~
There was a time I always dreamed about flying. In one of that dreams, I was going to school to submit some paper.
>>> There was a time when I always dreamed about flying. In one of those dreams, I was going to school to submit a paper.
There was a park full of trees and beside it, there was a wide land covered with grass and huge river.
>>> There was a park full of trees and beside it, there was a wide land covered with grass and a huge river.
When I was in the park, suddenly I could jump higher than normal and whenever I walk, it was like walking on a trmpoline.
>>> When I was in the park, suddenly I could jump higher than normal and whenever I walked, it was like walking on a trampoline.
The more I jump, the higher it gets and after all, I could jump very high(5-10meters)and softly so it almost looked like flying.
>>> The more I jumped, the higher it got and after all, I could jump very high (5-10 meters)and softly so it almost looked like flying.
People in the park said I jump very high. Wind from the river brought me higher.
>>> People in the park said I jumped very high. Wind from the river brought me higher.
It was hard to control the direction but it was fascinating.
>>> CORRECT!
My classmates said I fly because I want attention, but I couldn\'t stop.
>>> CORRECT!
In another flying dream, I jumped too high, so I couldn\'t stop after I got to high sky where even clouds don\'t exist but I landed safely.
>>> In another flying dream, I jumped too high, so I couldn\'t stop after I got to the high sky where even clouds didn\'t exist but I landed safely.
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