Temperature
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Theme: [ESSAY] How does a change in temperature affect your feelings or mood?
At sunny day, I feel good but sometime, I feel displeasure.
At rainy day, I feel displeasure too but I feel happy because on rainy day, my concentration go up.
At cold day, I don\'t want to go out.
At hot day, I don\'t want to go out ethier. I just stay at home reading or playing.
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Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] How does a change in temperature affect your feelings or mood?
At sunny day, I feel good but sometime, I feel displeasure.
>> On sunny days, I sometimes feel good, but there are also times that I feel unhappy.
>> or: On sunny days, I sometimes feel good, but there are also moments that I feel displeased.
At rainy day, I feel displeasure too but I feel happy because on rainy day, my concentration go up.
>> On rainy days, I feel unhappy as well but once in a while, my concentration goes up so, during those times, I feel happy.
At cold day, I don\'t want to go out.
>> On cold days, I don\'t want to go out.
At hot day, I don\'t want to go out ethier. I just stay at home reading or playing.
>> On hot or warm days, I don\'t want to go out either. I prefer to stay at home reading or playing.
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