Terrible olympic:(
학생이 쓴 원문
A two days ago I watched the Olympic skating competition.
Every Korean got the shocked to see the results.
Korean players they were pass the final line perfectly.
But China judge eliminated Korean players.
For Chiness player.
So Chiness players they can going to be a final game.
Every Korean get angry and me too.
It\'s terrible Olympic game.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
That\'s terrible. The votes are completely biased. :(
A two days ago I watched the Olympic skating competition.
>> Two days ago, I watched the Olympic skating competition.
Every Korean got the shocked to see the results.
>> Every Korean was shocked when they saw the results.
Korean players they were pass the final line perfectly.
>> The Korean players should\'ve passed the finals.
But China judge eliminated Korean players.
>> But the Chinese judge eliminated the Korean players for the Chinese players.
For Chiness player.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
So Chiness players they can going to be a final game.
>> So, the Chinese players can go to the finals.
Every Korean get angry and me too.
>> Every Korean is angry because of this.
It\'s terrible Olympic game.
>> It\'s a terrible Olympic game.
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