Terrible weekend and this weekend will be good weekend

2015-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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These days I always have terrible weekend because I am busy.I have a math class.The math teacher gave me a lot of homework.I was angry but I have to do.I hate math.I don't know why math is important.I think I might lose my weekend.My weekend is "homework"day.This weekend is my grandmotehr's birthday.So, I can take a rest and I can watch a baseball game.

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Hi [이름] , I hope that you had a great day! Homeworks are sometimes annoying but I believe that you can finish all of those tasks just focus and think of the positive side for you to finish your homework fast and have the time to enjoy the weekend.   Thank you and see you in our class. ---Teacher Kris     These days I always have terrible weekend because I am busy. >> CORRECT OR:>> I am busy these days so I always have a terrible weekend. I have a math class. >> CORRECT The math teacher gave me a lot of homework. >> My math teacher gave me a lot of homework. I was angry but I have to do. >> I was angry but I have to do my homework. OR:>> I was angry but I can\'t do anything but to finish it. I hate math. >> CORRECT OR: >> I really hate math. I don\'t know why math is important. >> CORRECT OR>> I can\'t understand why Math is important. I think I might lose my weekend. >> CORRECT My weekend is \"homework\"day. >> CORRECT OR: >> I consider my weekend \"Homework Day\". This weekend is my grandmotehr\'s birthday.So, I can take a rest and I can watch a baseball game. >> I can take a rest and watch a baseball game this weekend because it is my grandmother\'s birthday.

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