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2011-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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yeatday i got the test i think it would be good store, but it wasn't. i got a 65 point in the math test.i'm so surprise,becsuse i always got 90 point,85 point, 95point or 100point in the math test.so i'm so sad adn i cryed.because my mohter hurt me but i'm naver give up next math test i got aa great point mom dad don't be worry!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Justin! It is sad to hear that your score was not good but do not focus on your failures. Concentrate on you success. Do your best next time!

-- Teacher Marie.

yeatday i got the test i think it would be good store, but it wasn't.

>>>I took a test yesterday and I thought I would get a good score, but I did not.

i got a 65 point in the math test.

>>>I got 65 points in the Math test.

i'm so surprise,becsuse i always got 90 point,85 point, 95point or 100point in the math test.

>>>I'm so surprised because I always get high scores like 90, 85, 95 or 100 in math.

so i'm so sad adn i cryed.because my mohter hurt me

>>>So I'm so sad and I cried because my mother punished me.

but i'm naver give up next math test i got aa great point mom dad don't be worry!

>>>Even so, I will never give up on the next Math test. I will get a high score. Mom and dad, don't be worried!

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