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2020-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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moreover on the other hand at least however besides firstly whereas then actually though 1.... On the other hand I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last! 2. ..., at least there are some educational programs on. 3. Firstly , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today. 4. Though the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out. 5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However_ , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice! 6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Then_, I had breakfast and left for work. 7. My brother works in a large office whereas_ I work on my own at home. 8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Actually_ , I would be delighted to get out of the house. 9. You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. Moreover, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and ge

강사 첨삭

Hi Sue! Thank you for this homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^ 
You did great with this one! Keep it up! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

1.... On the other hand I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
>>I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too.At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. ..., at least there are some educational programs on.
>>Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. On the other hand, there are some educational programs on.
3. Firstly , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.
>>CORRECT
4. Though the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.
>>CORRECT
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However_ , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
>>CORRECT
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Then_, I had breakfast and left for work.
>>CORRECT
7. My brother works in a large office whereas_ I work on my own at home.
>>CORRECT
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Actually_ , I would be delighted to get out of the house.
>>CORRECT
9. You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. Moreover, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and get important qualifications and get a better job.
>>CORRECT

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