textbook and notebook
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that textbook and notebook should coexist.
Becuase they have original fuction, each other.
Textbook can be mindful and spiritual training for children they
wrtiing as pencil.
Notebook can be the training of new thechology.
It is same as costume and new culture should coexsit.
강사 첨삭
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Take care and have a great Monday!
I think that textbook and notebook should coexist.
>>I think that textbooks and notebook computers should coexist.Becuase they have original fuction, each other.
>>Because each of them has an original function.
Textbook can be mindful and spiritual training for children they wrtiing as pencil.
>>Textbooks can serve as training for the mind and spirit of the children.Notebook can be the training of new thechology.
>>Notebooks computers, on the other hand, can serve as a training of new technology.It is same as costume and new culture should coexsit.
>>It is like comparing costume with culture, which must furthermore, coexist.
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