TGIF!

2024-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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Hi Kristine, It\\\'s TGIF. What is your friday going so far? Do you have any plan for this evening? Actually I studied and cooked all the day. Just don\\\'t want to stop studing english. It seems to be good sign. 1. The vendor also offers churros as a viable desert option as a viable desert option? What does it mean? 2. HOMEWORK FOR 01/12: Writing Task: Do you think the ambience is important in restaurants? I think it is very important. You know I personally don\\\'t like law fish like avalone, sea cucumber and sea squirt. But I only enjoy those at the restaurant where has sea view in front of beach. I feel like that I am eating food and ambience both. * Pls check it out with these below sentence I wrote. As I\'ve gotten older, sour flavors have been something that i\'ve gone to a lot more. and I attached audio record that I really couldn\'t get it what the guy said . He said \' Who is..\'

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Hello there, [이름]!

Enjoy your weekedn and let\'s practice more in class! See you! 

- Kristine ^^ 

Hi Kristine,
It\\\'s TGIF. What is your friday going so far?
>> It\'s TGIF. How is your Friday going so far?
Do you have any plan for this evening?
>> Do you have any plans this evening?
Actually I studied and cooked all the day. 
>> Actually, I studied and cooked all day.
Just don\\\'t want to stop studing english. 
>> I just don\'t want to stop studying English.
It seems to be good sign.
>> It seems to be a good sign.

1. The vendor also offers churros as a viable desert option
as a viable desert option? What does it mean?
>> Another term for viable is possible or alternatives. 
>>> In this sentence, The vendor also offers churros as a viable desert option. It means that the vendor offers other menu/food to the customer. 

2. HOMEWORK FOR 01/12:
Writing Task: Do you think the ambience is important in restaurants?
I think it is very important.
>> Correct.
You know I personally don\\\'t like law fish like avalone, sea cucumber and sea squirt. 
>> You know I personally don\'t like raw fish like avalone, sea cucumber, and sea squirt.
But I only enjoy those at the restaurant where has sea view in front of beach. 
>> But I only enjoy those at the restaurant that has a sea view in front of the beach.
I feel like that I am eating food and ambience both.
>> The ambience is perfect for eating seafood.

* Pls check it out with these below sentence I wrote.
>> Please check the sentences I wrote below.

As I\'ve gotten older, sour flavors have been something that i\'ve gone to a lot more.
>> Correct. 
Or >> The older I\'ve gotten, the more I\'ve drawn for sour flavor. 

and I attached audio record that I really couldn\'t get it what the guy said . He said \' Who is..\'
>> And I attached an audio file because I really couldn\'t get what the guy said. He said, \'Who is?\'
>>>> There\'s no audio file attached to this message. However, it seems that the guy said, \"Who is it?\", \"Who\'s there?\', or \"Who is she/he?\". 

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