TGIF
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
A pleasant Friday!
Wow!You are very diligent in doing your homework.
Keep it up!
You even opened something interesting here that we can likely talk about in class.^^
Have a wonderful weekend!
~~T. Chloe~~
Hello!! Happy TGIF!!
>>Correct!
It\'s raining in here but It will stop afternoon.
>>It\'s raining here but it will stop this afternoon.
I also did yoga this morning.
I am not perfect to do it but I am sure I will be better than before.
>>I don\'t do it perfectly but I am sure I will be better than before.
When I go to summer vacation, I want to show my body shape to myboyfriend.
>>When I will go on summer vacation, I want to show my body shape to my boyfriend.
So I try to reduce my weight.
>>So I am trying to reduce some of my weight.
I hope that my condision will be good until our class.
>>I hope that my condition will be good until our class.
Anyway This is homework.
1. Once the mother is cleared of the charges of child neglect, custody of the children will be returned to her.
>>Correct!
2. \"Please accept this fruit basket as a token of my appreciation for your help last week,\" my neighbor said.
>>Correct!
3. The coach of the school basketball team used to be a national player in his younger days so he is very experienced.
>>Correct!
4. While I was walking down the street this afternoon, I witnessed a policeman in chase of a thief.
>>pursuit
5. After having gone through a near severe accident, Leon is now more appreciative of everything around him.
>>fatal.
Have a nice weekend. Chloe!!
>>Correct!
See you soon. Bye!
>>Correct!
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