TGIF

2013-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Today Is TGIF!! I am so happy I am waiting today form Monday. Actually, I don't want work. It is not fun or I didn't feel any achievement. I konw every work is the same. I have to earn the money. I need it more. So this week was very long and no means. I just woke up in the morning and worked again anf again. Finally, today is Fiday and I will spend more time for me. See you soon!Angle! Do you have any plan for the weekend?

강사 첨삭

Hi! Good job on your essay! I can see that you have put a lot of thought in it. I just like to remind you of your typographical errors so that you may avoid misspelled words. It is also good that you are able to use your punctuation marks correctly. I hope that someday you will find happiness in working. =) I know that working isn\'t easy, but we always have to look at the bright side of things. Anyway, good job and keep it up! HelloToday Is TGIF!! >TGIF/ Thank God it\'s Friday!I am so happy I am waiting today form Monday. >I\'ve been waiting for this day since Monday. Actually, I don\'t want work. > Actually, I don\'t want to work. It is not fun or I didn\'t feel any achievement. > I feel like I haven\'t achieved anything from working, it really isn\'t fun. I konw every work is the same. >I know every work is the same. I have to earn the money. I need it more. >I need more money that is why I have to work harder. So this week was very long and no means. > It has been a long and meaningless week. I just woke up in the morning and worked again anf again. >Every morning I wake up, doing the same things again and again. Finally, today is Fiday and I will spend more time for me. > Finally it\'s Friday! See you soon!Angle! >See you soon Angel! Do you have any plan for the weekend? >Do you have plans for this weekend?

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