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2013-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Good morning! Happy Monday. How was your weekend? I spent a great day eventhough I fought with myboyfriend. Last Saturday, we was going to meet but his work finished too late. But he didn't contact anthing so I was very angry at him. When he called me he didn't appolozie but he was angery at me. I don't understand at that time. Last night, He said that he is sorry for me. and I agreed because I love him. Anyway, Have a nice day! and see you soon!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thank you  for sharing your experience. Anyway, I\'m happy you\'re okay now.

I think you know that misunderstanding is normal in a relationship. So just enjoy your friendship.^^ 

Have a great day! See you!^^

~ Teacher Angel~

 Good morning!

>> Correct!
Happy Monday.

>> Correct!
How was your weekend?

>> Correct!
I spent a great day eventhough I fought with myboyfriend.

>>  I spent a great day even though I fought with my boyfriend.
Last Saturday, we was going to meet but his work finished too late.

>> Last Saturday, we were supposed to meet but he finished his work too late. 
But he didn\'t contact anthing so I was very angry at him.

>> But he didn\'t even contact me, so I was very angry with him.
When he called me he didn\'t appolozie but he was angery at me.

>> When he called me he didn\'t even apologize and he was angry with me.
I don\'t understand at that time.
>> I didn\'t understand him at that time.
Last night, He said that he is sorry for me.

>> Last night, he said that he is sorry.

and I agreed because I love him.
>> I forgave him because I love him.^^
Anyway, Have a nice day!

>> Anyway, have a nice day!

 and see you soon!!

>>  See you soon!!^^

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