Thank for your kindly asssist
학생이 쓴 원문
Y-day\'s lesson was my first class my this system.
I was warry about this unfamillier system and the new education style for me, however teacher Ms. [Name] adviced and teached very kindly
especially the new system.
Unfortunatly my voice was inoperated due to system erro or my poor handling I did\'nt know till now, finally teacher sent me cell phon
and we had comunicated as we intended.
This morning I reported y-days matter and center staff corrected ths sysetm, therfore I hope normal lesson from Fri class.
Anyway many thank for teacher Ms. [Name] and staff of center. CAVOK
강사 첨삭
Hi and Good afternoon, Cavok!
Thank you for submitting your composition and feedback.
I sincerely appreciate it.
I\'m glad that the center\'s staff had helped you with the system.
I\'m also hoping that tomorrow\'s class will be good. ^^
Just like the beautiful picture you sent me, I hope that you will also have a beautiful day ahead.
Take care and see you tomorrow! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Yesterday was my first class to have a lesson in this system.
I was warry about this unfamillier system and the new education style for me, however teacher Ms. [Name] adviced and teached very kindly
especially the new system.
I was warry about this unfamillier system and the new education style for me, however teacher Ms. [Name] adviced and teached very kindly
especially the new system.
>> I was wary about this unfamiliar system and the new education style for me. However, teacher Gina advised and taught me very kindly especially in this new system.
Unfortunatly my voice was inoperated due to system erro or my poor handling I did\'nt know till now, finally teacher sent me cell phon
and we had comunicated as we intended.
Unfortunatly my voice was inoperated due to system erro or my poor handling I did\'nt know till now, finally teacher sent me cell phon
and we had comunicated as we intended.
>> Unfortunately, my voice was inaudible due to a system error or my poor handling which I didn\'t know \'til now. Finally, the teacher called me on my cellphone and we communicated as we intended.
This morning I reported y-days matter and center staff corrected ths sysetm, therfore I hope normal lesson from Fri class.
This morning I reported y-days matter and center staff corrected ths sysetm, therfore I hope normal lesson from Fri class.
>> This morning, I reported yesterday\'s matter and the center\'s staff corrected the system. Therefore, I hope that we will have a normal class on Friday.
Anyway many thank for teacher Ms. [Name] and staff of center. CAVOK
Anyway many thank for teacher Ms. [Name] and staff of center. CAVOK
>> Anyway, thank you so much to Ms. [Name] and the staff of the center. CAVOK
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