THANK YOU
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : [ESSAY] When did you last say \"thank you\" to someone and why?
It was today, about 1 pm at school.
Because my friend held my water bottle.
So, I said, \"Oh! Thanks!\"
I say \'Thank You\' to many people!
Because, I know when you receive a thank you, you can be happy!
It was today, about 1 pm at school!! : )
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Theme : [ESSAY] When did you last say \"thank you\" to someone and why?
It was today, about 1 pm at school.
Because my friend held my water bottle.
>> or: It happened today at about 1 pm at school and it was because my friend held my water bottle.
So, I said, \"Oh! Thanks!\"
>> or: That\'s why I thanked her.
I say \'Thank You\' to many people!
>> or: I thank countless people.
Because, I know when you receive a thank you, you can be happy!
>> I do this because I know when you receive a \"thank you\", you can be happy.
>> or: I do this since I know receiving gratitude from others can make a person feel happy.
It was today, about 1 pm at school!! : )
>> or: The last time I thanked someone happened this afternoon at school.
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