Thank you!
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to try change blonde of my hair colors.
Usually my hair color is dark brown or light brown.
My skin color is yellow tone so I think light color isn\'t look good on me.
But I hope have a chance my hair color change.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Your hair is very lovely and the straight and curls suits you perfectly. I think this is still a part of your preparation for your departure for Canada. You will miss styling your hair in Korea.
Anyway, your sentences below are very good! The suggestions I made were underlined for your convenience. You have worked so hard and I thank you for that!
See you later!
-T. Donna =)
>> I want to try to change to a blonde hair color.
Usually my hair color is dark brown or light brown.
>> Correct!
My skin color is yellow tone so I think light color isn\'t look good on me.
>> My skin color is a yellow tone so I think a light color doesn\'t look good on me.
But I hope have a chance my hair color change.
>> But I hope I will have a chance to change my hair color.
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