Thank you~

2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank you~ Ms. [Name]~ You are always very energetic and genenrous to me. It gives me a motivation to stay focused on my daily life. Whenever I talk to you on the phone. I can get a kind of feeling that you are very considerate on both words and sentences. As you know, we have talked about lots of things for several years ranging from private stuff to something serious in society. Even though You are younger than me, you have always led me to look at a bight side in every my gloomy day like best friend. TO make a long story short, I want to say "THANK YOU" and "Happy Teacher's day."

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Wow! This is so touching! I was so surprised to receive this from you because you don\'t write here at all. I really appreciate this. I know you\'re busy, and very significantly, I know, and you know that you don\'t usually get this serious in saying \"thank you\". Well, I would like to extend my gratitude to you, too, for being kind to me. We\'ve been together in class for a long time and I\'m happy you never get tired of me. I hope to spend more time with you. Take care always! T. JanE ^^ Thank you~ Ms. [Name]~>> Correct You are always very energetic and generous to me. >> Correct It gives me a motivation to stay focused on my daily life. >> It gives me motivation to stay focused on my daily life.  Whenever I talk to you on the phone. I can get a kind of feeling that you are very considerate on both words and sentences. >> Whenever I talk to you on the phone, I can get a kind of feeling that you are very considerate on both words and sentences.  As you know, we have talked about lots of things for several years ranging from private stuff to something serious in society. >> Correct Even though You are younger than me, you have always led me to look at a bight side in every my gloomy day like best friend. >> Even though you are younger than me, you have always led me to look at the bright side on my gloomy days like my best friend.  TO make a long story short, I want to say \"THANK YOU\" and \"Happy Teacher\'s day.\" >> Correct

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