Thank you

Hello [이름]!

Today, I want you to focus on conjunctions like \'and\', \'because\' and \'but.\'

Avoid using them in the beginning of sentences.

They connect and not introduce ideas.

Other than that, you did great!

Keep writing!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don’t like shopping but if I have to go to shopping, I preper with my friends.
>> I don’t like shopping but if I have to go to shopping, I prefer to go with my friends.
Because when we are shopping, we can check the each other style and we can eat a food after finish shopping.
>> This is because when we are shopping, we can check each other\'s style and we can eat out after shopping.
And I know that my style is very bad so if I will be able to shopping with my friends, they pick up the clothes for me :D
>> I know that I don\'t have a sense of style so I need my friends to pick out some clothes for me.
Anyway I have cold for 3 days, so I have to keep to take a medicine..

>> I have had a cold for 3 days so I have to keep taking medicine.