Thank you! Donna!
학생이 쓴 원문
I like korean actress. Her name is Kim Tae-ry.
She is very cute and beautiful. Also she is very smart and good actress.
If you see her acting, you will like her.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again, Ms, [이름]!
I think Kim Tae Ri is very beautiful and talented. I actually think overall, that Korean actors and actresses are absolutely talented. When I watch them, I get carried away by the way they act.
So, thank you very much for these excellent sentences! They are short but correct and I love them! Continue doing a hard and smart work.
See you in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> I like a Korean actress.
She is very cute and beautiful.
If you see her acting, you will like her.
Her name is Kim Tae-ry.
>> Correct!
She is very cute and beautiful.
>> Correct!
Also she is very smart and good actress.
>> Also she is very smart and is a very good actress.
If you see her acting, you will like her.
>> Correct!
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