Thank you! Donna!
학생이 쓴 원문
I like children.
So my dream was kindergarten teacher from when I was young.
Finally I done kidergarten teacher and I liked our class\'s life with children. If I have a chance I want to again kindergarten teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hello there. Ms. [이름]!
Being a kindergarten teacher is such a fun job! It is like just playing and enjoying time with children who are innocent and natural. This can be my dream job too!
Thank you for sharing this answer on your homework. I know that you were a very good kindergarten teacher many years way back.
See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
So my dream was kindergarten teacher from when I was young.
>> So my dream was to become a kindergarten teacher when I was young.
Finally I done kidergarten teacher and I liked our class\'s life with children.
>> Finally, when I became a kindergarten teacher, I liked our class life with the children.
If I have a chance I want to again kindergarten teacher.
>> If I have a chance, I want to be a kindergarten teacher again.
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