Thank you for your advice.

2014-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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23th homework I think having a more high EI is more important EI have strong power to move IQ. EI csn move thought, feeling, and spirit. So I can work very energetic. 24th homework 1- All right 2- I am afraid I can't 3- Don't mention it 4- Yes, I could 5- How do you do 6- I'd rather you didn't 7- Yes, I will Thank you 8- I'm so sorry 9- Yours, too 10- Yes, it is

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]
It is good to hear that you are feeling better than yesterday.
Hope it will continue until the end of this week.
And thank you for answering your homework.
See you again next time!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

23th homework
I think having a more high EI is more important
>> I think that having a high EQ is more important.
EI have strong power to move IQ.
>> EQ has a strong power to move than IQ.
EI csn move thought, feeling, and spirit.
>> EQ can move thought, feeling, and spirit.
So I can work very energetic.
>> So I can work energetically.
24th homework
1- All right
>> I\'m pleased to meet you.
2- I am afraid I can\'t
>> correct!
3- Don\'t mention it
>> correct!
4- Yes, I could
>> Yes, of course.
5- How do you do
>> correct!
6- I\'d rather you didn\'t
>> correct!
7- Yes, I will Thank you
>> correct!
8- I\'m so sorry
>> correct!
9- Yours, too
>> The same to you.
10- Yes, it is
>> correct!

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