Thank you for your advices

2010-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Lei, I saw your last comment. Thank you for your advices. I need a advice as you pointed out. I will do my effort to improve the vowel sound. Thanks! Charlse.

강사 첨삭

Hi Charles!
I am glad to hear that you are paying attention to my observations. You are positive about it. As I told you before, I will be putting on the comments the things that I observed during our class. Just keep on practicing okay. See you!!
Lei :-)

Lei,
I saw your last comment.

>>correct
Thank you for your advices.
>>correct

I need a advice as you pointed out.

>>I need such advice which you pointed out.
I will do my effort to improve the vowel sound.

>>I will give a lot of effort just to improve my pronunciation especially with the vowel sounds.

>>I will do my best to improve my pronunciation with the vowel sounds
Thanks!

Charles

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