Thank you for your composition.

2011-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

I read your composition in this morning. Thank you very much. Your composition is very fast. It will rain today.So sky is gloomy. I and my girlfriend talked about present. Result becamed well. Have a good day.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :) It was my pleasure! I wonder what you guys have come up with your anniversary presents. Kk^^ Don\'t forget to bring your umbrella then! Have a great day and I\'ll speak with you again later! -Tiny^0^ I read your composition in this morning. >>I read your composition this morning.Thank you very much. >>Correct.Your composition is very fast.>>(BETTER) Your reply is very prompt. It will rain today.So sky is gloomy. >>It will rain today because the sky is gloomy.I and my girlfriend talked about present. >>My girlfriend and I talked about the present.Result becamed well. >>spelling check: became >>The result became well.Have a good day. >>Correct.

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