Thank you for your composition.
학생이 쓴 원문
I read your composition in this morning.
Thank you very much.
Your composition is very fast.
It will rain today.So sky is gloomy.
I and my girlfriend talked about present.
Result becamed well.
Have a good day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! :)
It was my pleasure!
I wonder what you guys have come up with your anniversary presents. Kk^^
Don\'t forget to bring your umbrella then!
Have a great day and I\'ll speak with you again later!
-Tiny^0^
I read your composition in this morning.
>>I read your composition this morning.Thank you very much.
>>Correct.Your composition is very fast.>>(BETTER) Your reply is very prompt.
It will rain today.So sky is gloomy.
>>It will rain today because the sky is gloomy.I and my girlfriend talked about present.
>>My girlfriend and I talked about the present.Result becamed well.
>>spelling check: became
>>The result became well.Have a good day.
>>Correct.
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