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There are major seven modes and other types from walking to taking a cab. There was a little change in the figure for walking from 255 to 237, in 1985 and 2000 respectively. Similarly, the number for bicycle also had a small change by 10 from 51 to 41 during the period. However, there was a plummet in the use of local bus between 1985 and 2000; the figure for local bus declined from 429 to 285. Many other types for the gravel surged over the surveyed period. For example, the number for the car increased with rapidity by almost 1600 from 3,199 to 4,806. Furthermore, although the others grew less faster than the car, the figures for the others went up gradually from the year 1985 to 2000. As time goes by, the total distances in miles per person per year increased considerably from 4,750 to 9999 miles. However, three major modes, walking, bicycle, and local bus, became less used by people.

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