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2018-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hi Beth I had good interview yesterday. I was worried about English question but that was very normal question than I expected. They asked my weekendlife and if I join the company what I want this company and other question was about family members. Most of question was practiced with you. Thank you for teching me. ^ ^ After the English interview we negotiate of annual salary. I had explanied a good reason for high salary and they also try to get approval from head office. I have to wait for their reply by this friday. Please help me a good result. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. This is good to hear. Seems like they have a positive impression on you. Let\'s hope for a good result. Good luck! :D

- T. Beth

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I had good interview yesterday.
>>>> CORRECT. 

I was worried about English question but that was very normal question than I expected.
>>>> I was worried about the English questions but they asked very basic question than I expected.  

They asked my weekendlife and if I join the company what I want this company and other question was about family members. 

>>>>  They asked about my weekend life and if I join the company what I want from this company and other question was about family members. 

Most of question was practiced with you.
>>>> Most of questions they asked were the ones I practiced with you.  

Thank you for teching me. ^ ^
>>>> Thank you for teaching me.
After the English interview we negotiate of annual salary.
>>>>  After the English interview, we negotiated on the annual salary. 

I had explanied a good reason for high salary and they also try to get approval from head office.
>>>> I had explained a good reason for the high salary and they will also try to get approval from the head office.   

I have to wait for their reply by this friday.
>>>>  CORRECT. (I have to wait for their reply by this Friday.) 

Please help me a good result.

>>>> Please help me get a good result.

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